Nadrian, Great job with your Nonsense poem, I really enjoyed it! I love how you described feelings as being full of nonsense, because it's so true! I always get those feelings where I have no clue how to describe my thoughts or my emotions, and I think this nonsense poem was a great way of describing how I feel, and probably how everyone feels at some point! I also really like all of the nonsense words you used! They were really fun, and it's great that you cited that you got most of them from edmodo, so it's not like forging anyone's ideas! I also really liked your picture! I don't think you could've picked any better image to describe and help add to your poem! So, overall I think you did a fantastic job with your poem! It was super unique, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future.
You're poem was amazing, it really got me thinking about things that I never really thought of. I really love how you said that nonsense can be an emotion, because it really can. You're poem was a good way to describe how nonsense words can be a great way to describe a feeling that you can't describe with just normal words. You did a really good job describing feelings in a very real tone that many people could understand and relate to. I think that your poem was one of the most original, no one wrote anything like yours. Good job! ☆
Wow Nadrian your poem was way out of the blue. So many emotion in just one poem. Nadrian if you had more time would you have added more emotions. I liked how you though of Edmodo and added some of our words. Overall the best part of your poem for me was "Nonsense can actually be an emotion, emotions that you can explain"
A nonsense poem that I can relate to, unique! I could tell you were speaking from experience with confusing emotions, which made your writing more poignant. Most people would say there wasn't a plot, but I think you managed to use the emotions to guide poem with a hint of a background plot.
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ReplyDeleteGreat job with your Nonsense poem, I really enjoyed it! I love how you described feelings as being full of nonsense, because it's so true! I always get those feelings where I have no clue how to describe my thoughts or my emotions, and I think this nonsense poem was a great way of describing how I feel, and probably how everyone feels at some point! I also really like all of the nonsense words you used! They were really fun, and it's great that you cited that you got most of them from edmodo, so it's not like forging anyone's ideas! I also really liked your picture! I don't think you could've picked any better image to describe and help add to your poem! So, overall I think you did a fantastic job with your poem! It was super unique, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future.
Nadrian,
ReplyDeleteYou're poem was amazing, it really got me thinking about things that I never really thought of. I really love how you said that nonsense can be an emotion, because it really can. You're poem was a good way to describe how nonsense words can be a great way to describe a feeling that you can't describe with just normal words. You did a really good job describing feelings in a very real tone that many people could understand and relate to. I think that your poem was one of the most original, no one wrote anything like yours. Good job! ☆
Nadrian,
ReplyDeleteWow Nadrian your poem was way out of the blue. So many emotion in just one poem. Nadrian if you had more time would you have added more emotions. I liked how you though of Edmodo and added some of our words. Overall the best part of your poem for me was
"Nonsense can actually be an emotion,
emotions that you can explain"
A nonsense poem that I can relate to, unique! I could tell you were speaking from experience with confusing emotions, which made your writing more poignant. Most people would say there wasn't a plot, but I think you managed to use the emotions to guide poem with a hint of a background plot.
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