"The minute I saw her,"
"I just got this sudden, odd feeling."
"It hit me in the heart so hard."
"I know the lady back there"
"But why are you so concerned?"
"Because this is about us."
"I get the feeling,"
"You don't seem to care."
This is a love triangle poem. Going with a theme of love this week. Spine poetry is themed with love, so this is too!
The guy, the first speaker, who we'll call Andrew, is telling her friend who we'll call Melissa, that he is interested/likes this other girl. Then Melissa basically shows that she likes Andrew.
I named this Three Stemmed Rose since it's a love triangle. A rose with three characters included in it's story of LUV.
Nadrian, you never struck me as a "romantic" theme person. That's kind of funny, but I really love your poem! The title fits it perfectly too! Great job!
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